poems..my darker side

Feeling scattered and overwhelmed. Nothing that the wonderful manic mind can pin point, as then the issue would be resolved. So, as for now i ramble on trying to ride the wave and avoid the tide. A simple poem about sanity, or lack there of at times of racing thoughts.

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To my once loved sanity.

I wonder why you left me
I wonder why you’d try
To rip my perfect world to shreds
And leave me here to cry

I wonder why you left me
In a world all cold and unsweet
I wonder why you didn’t care
And didn’t want to meet

I wonder why you left me
To face my battles alone
I wonder why I tried to love
The woman I had known

I wonder if you try to forget
The memories we have shared
I wonder if you even remember
That I had shown I cared

I wonder if you remember me
All belted up and blue
I wonder if you hide the past
Or realize it was true

But now I’m tired of wondering,
I accept that were apart,
But even that doesn’t change the fact
That you have broke my heart

10 Responses to “poems..my darker side”

  1. coachk April 9, 2013 at 11:09 am #

    wow mess, this poem is a strong as your erotic side really shows your ability to piece words together into beautiful ideas. this earns a special good girl…..

    • hotlilmess April 9, 2013 at 11:32 am #

      thank you much. *smiles. This is an old one.

  2. coachk April 9, 2013 at 11:45 am #

    new to me and i love what you dd with it

    • hotlilmess April 9, 2013 at 11:51 am #

      Thank you Sir, thank you.

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  3. Chatty Owl April 13, 2013 at 11:55 am #

    Oh.. This is so raw.

    • hotlilmess April 13, 2013 at 12:21 pm #

      Thank you for reading and commenting. It is rarely looked at, or too raw to promote commenting. One of those i often wonder if i really should have posted. Thank you.

      • Chatty Owl April 13, 2013 at 12:29 pm #

        Dont be silly! Its good. Then again, not everyone is here for the same, huh?
        I know i liked it 🙂

        • hotlilmess April 13, 2013 at 12:33 pm #

          lol..once i click i commit… 🙂 thank you again !

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  4. mrmodigliani October 14, 2013 at 12:21 pm #

    This is heartfelt and pure. Just want to acknowledge your talent

    • hotlilmess October 14, 2013 at 12:34 pm #

      Thank you so much. I can’t believe you are a painter at heart…your words on your own work must be breathtaking.

      Sent from my Android phone on T-Mobile. America’s first nationwide 4G network.

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