11 Oct


A way of life.
A beautiful passionate being.
A woman who gets wet with Your words.
A girl who sheds a tear from a look.
A woman with such pride to be owned.
A girl who grins at Your belt alone.
A craving,so much more than a want.
Your approval,brings her to her knees.
That woman. That girl.
So submissive, so free.

14 Responses to “Wonderment.”

  1. ineedyoutoneedme October 11, 2013 at 11:40 am #

    Reblogged this on I NEED YOU TO NEED ME.

  2. njuri October 11, 2013 at 11:42 am #


  3. SouthernSir October 11, 2013 at 11:47 am #

    Lovely, so deep and heartfelt.

  4. genuinesubgirl October 11, 2013 at 1:56 pm #

    Reblogged this on Wine, Coffee, Life and commented:
    This is fabulous!

    • hotlilmess October 11, 2013 at 2:09 pm #

      Wow,thank you so much.The best part is it brought me to your blog. Thank you.

      • genuinesubgirl October 11, 2013 at 2:12 pm #

        Thank you! I do not have literary talent, I’m just trying to muddle through my life’s mess as best I can and I think best out loud so I’m sharing it here. Thanks for looking!

  5. m3llowm3ow October 11, 2013 at 6:25 pm #

    Reblogged this on The Meow Doll.

  6. cailinfire October 12, 2013 at 3:24 pm #

    “So submissive, so free”…..those words are so very true!♥

    • hotlilmess October 13, 2013 at 7:12 am #

      Thank you, sometimes the words just click. i am glad you can relate.

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