1 May


He asks what she is doing. she simply says,

“waiting for you”….

He has her undone,

her body consumed with desire,

an internal fire that continues to grow

not a desire to meet her needs

a craving simply to please.

she feels as warm as the noon day sun

as young as the spring flowers that have sprung.

It is that moment she learns

His pleasure means more than hers.

she freezes.

Here she will wait and prepare for His response.

He has her undone.

13 Responses to “Undone.”

  1. SouthernSir May 1, 2013 at 1:49 pm #

    Those three words “waiting for you” such intense power in them.

    • hotlilmess May 1, 2013 at 4:27 pm #

      Thank you. It makes me smile that you can appreciate my words.

  2. Master's Slave May 1, 2013 at 2:00 pm #

    She is always wanton always insatiable.

    • hotlilmess May 1, 2013 at 4:28 pm #

      Ready to kneel. Ready to leap into His arms. Ready to walk behind Him. Beside Him. Ready to dance.

  3. paddledhusband May 1, 2013 at 2:07 pm #

    Grr I don’t know why my Like button isn’t working. But consider this post liked. Nicely written. I love the pic too!

    • hotlilmess May 1, 2013 at 4:30 pm #

      Well, it is the thought that counts. i am glad you thought it was worth liking. Thank you.

  4. littlekaninchen May 1, 2013 at 3:58 pm #

    I’m undone.. Now what? Lol! Great post!

    • hotlilmess May 1, 2013 at 4:26 pm #

      Thanks…and as for the undone, you are being such a good girl i hate to be a bad influence. lol

  5. hispetitelle May 1, 2013 at 3:58 pm #

    Yes, that line “waiting for you” is amazing.

    • hotlilmess May 1, 2013 at 4:31 pm #

      Thank you. It was such a natural response, i thought nothing of it. Thank you for noticing.

  6. JK May 2, 2013 at 12:22 pm #

    Just what every man wants to hear. Thanks for letting us all hear it vicariously.

    • hotlilmess May 2, 2013 at 1:24 pm #

      my pleasure. i am glad you enjoyed. Thank you.

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