Dark Angel

10 Apr


she is soft. she is subtle. she is thoughtful and full of thought. her pale flesh Angelic. she wants to take flight, make use of her wings. her darkest desires weigh heavy on her wings. her constant thoughts keep her on the ground. He knows she is an Angel. He will giver her flight. With every passing of the ice cold night, a warmer night is near. Exhausted from fear,she becomes grounded before her flight. So close to spreading her wings. she teeters on the edge. Dabbles her toe in the chilling waters. her soul warms. her wings spread. she smiles. she raises to her feet,embraces herself. Caught in her own dark desires. Fear of herself. Fear of releasing her guarded wings and taking flight. He watches in agony. Waits with patience. He has given her wings.

He will also give her flight.

*picture taken from FB page,Daddys Angel*

14 Responses to “Dark Angel”

  1. thedreamingsub April 10, 2013 at 2:49 am #


    • hotlilmess April 10, 2013 at 4:18 am #

      Too sweet, even with a headache and all. Thank you so much.

      • thedreamingsub April 10, 2013 at 7:31 am #

        You are welcome. Thank you for the inspiring words.

  2. Poetic Passions April 10, 2013 at 3:12 am #

    Beautiful words for a beautiful image.

  3. Shakti Ghosal April 10, 2013 at 3:27 am #

    Lovely picture.

    What jumped out at me is the line, “Exhausted from fear,she becomes grounded before her flight.” What is the shift we need to make to free ourselves from such fear?


    • hotlilmess April 10, 2013 at 4:20 am #

      Ultimate trust in ourselves. He has the trust. The weight of her own fear keeps her grounded.My opinion of course. ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you for reading and commenting.

  4. writingthebody April 10, 2013 at 3:33 am #

    I agree completey with Poetic Passions. Really lovely. Like you! The picture is only half of it….the prose poem does the rest.

  5. hotlilmess April 10, 2013 at 4:21 am #

    Awwe, warm fuzzies. Thank you. x

  6. steelmaster22 April 12, 2013 at 8:03 pm #

    Beautifully written and love the picture…

    • hotlilmess April 12, 2013 at 8:37 pm #

      Thank you so very much for reading and commenting. Your words are very kind.

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