Captive.

3 Apr

spenther world silent. her head and heart heavy. His world chaotic, stopping briefly to take her in. His words direct. His emotions in control. her body resentful. He knows her so well. He has turned her into a melting candle, in which the flame never dies. she worships Him. He is gentle,yet demanding. she loves to serve with every ounce she has to offer. He knows her limits. For Him,she has no limits. she is owned.

20 Responses to “Captive.”

  1. Jaden Marks April 3, 2013 at 3:40 am #

    You must be on the other side of the world or just up very late brainstorming these beautiful writings lol I’m on 3rd shift and it’s 3:30am here.

  2. hotlilmess April 3, 2013 at 3:49 am #

    The time is the same for me as well. Also 3rd shift. πŸ™‚ Thank you kindly for reading and commenting. Nice to know i am not boring you to sleep at this ridiculous hour.

  3. Jaden Marks April 3, 2013 at 4:03 am #

    Nope, not boring at all πŸ™‚

  4. writingthebody April 3, 2013 at 4:43 am #

    I think the word is love….well I hope it is….

  5. hotlilmess April 3, 2013 at 4:57 am #

    What is wrong with me that i prefer the word owned to love?? *sigh

  6. Jaden Marks April 3, 2013 at 5:20 am #

    He/she just probably doesn’t understand the mindset of a submissive. To be owned by a dominant in most cases, IS to be loved.

  7. hotlilmess April 3, 2013 at 5:28 am #

    Ahh, yes Sir, you are correct. In her mind,heart, and soul owned and loved are synonyms. It becomes threatening when they stand alone. Thank you.

  8. Arina April 3, 2013 at 9:53 am #

    Sent to my fan page on FB.

  9. hotlilmess April 3, 2013 at 10:20 am #

    Well, i am certainly honored. i am now sending myself to your fan page…Thank you so very much. You are well aware of how much i admire you! x

  10. ghostwriter1348 April 3, 2013 at 9:32 pm #

    Beautiful… Such devotion…

  11. mlbk7 April 3, 2013 at 11:47 pm #

    She is a Beautiful Submissive and this is wonderful. xo

    • hotlilmess April 4, 2013 at 8:54 am #

      Your words mean so very much to me. i am honored beyond belief that you read mine. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. x

  12. grizyeti April 5, 2013 at 10:33 pm #

    It speaks depths that both resentful and melting.
    you own us, the readers, i hope you know that inside.

    Your writing makes me want to say so much, yet leaves me unable to speak. Lost in your moment, we are

    • hotlilmess April 6, 2013 at 7:20 am #

      You.get.it. Thank you. Left me speechless as well.

  13. ineedyoutoneedme April 7, 2013 at 12:09 am #

    Reblogged this on I NEED YOU TO NEED ME.

  14. myatheistlife April 7, 2013 at 12:26 am #

    We choose what our world revolves around. Some look outside for that, some look inside for that, others mix n match. When one chooses to make that center another person you can call it owned, but the flux of ideas which flow in that sentiment are incredibly nuanced. So much so as to be misunderstood by all those who are not capable of empathizing with your world or choice. It’s sad that their worlds are so desolate as to not be able to understand yours. Mine is richer for your words, several new flowers are now growing in the garden in my head. Thank you.

  15. littlekaninchen May 5, 2013 at 11:29 pm #

    Sir owns me.. I’m captive…
    Somehow I missed this post… Really wonderful!
    LKβ€πŸ‡

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