29 Mar

her body shivers. her lip quivers. her nerves get the best of her. her self doubt. Raging inside. He must take her.

His hand steadies her body, His voice controls her soul. My pet, it is trust. Nothing more, nothing less. Cum. Stand with me.

I will not let you go. He takes her site. He takes her fear. He takes her burdens.

Breathe. Feel my touch. Feel my control. Hear my voice. Learn my moves.

Join my desires. Discover your needs.

Cum, my pet.

10 Responses to “Control”

  1. thesacredroad March 29, 2013 at 1:45 pm #

    Oooh. Lovely. Evocative. Erotic. X

  2. hotlilmess March 29, 2013 at 1:53 pm #

    Ahhhhh. Thank you so very much. Thrilled.

  3. thesacredroad March 29, 2013 at 1:56 pm #

    You should be. It’s a great piece. x

  4. hotlilmess March 29, 2013 at 2:04 pm #

    smiling. Some day. For now, i just get so excited that writer’s like you take the time to read,let alone comment. i become all giddy and dorky. Thank you again.

  5. ghostwriter3104 March 29, 2013 at 3:22 pm #

    This is amazingly beautiful and hot… Your mastery of words is truly an inspiration 🙂

  6. grizyeti March 30, 2013 at 12:24 am #

    shivers and quivers, raging and trusting, loving and cumming

    closing eyes and floating with what you have written, such lovely creation.

  7. hotlilmess March 30, 2013 at 6:25 am #

    smiles. thank you so very much.

  8. HusDom March 31, 2013 at 12:47 pm #

    Love it!


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